The following is part of a series: a case study written by a Career Advice Plus client who is searching for a job.
For my first conversation with Karen Battoe regarding my job search, she cut right to the chase:
- The job market is still historically tough, but companies ARE hiring
- 80% of jobs are gotten through networking, not submitting resumes through job boards
- If I did what she told me, I'd have a job in 90 days
"Now," she said, "lets talk about your resume."
I was a little nervous to hear what she had to say because I wasn't confident with my resume. I had never written an executive level resume before; and I wasn't sure how to organize it, how much to include, and what not to include. The resume I sent Karen for review was based on example I found online, and I had an unsettling feeling that it didn't properly represent me.
The Summary is now a Profile
I started my resume with a Summary. "The Summary is old-fashioned," Karen said. "We're going to call it a Profile." She explained that my profile was too vague; it used general terms and seemed to be trying to appeal to the largest audience possible. If a company is going to hire me, it will be cause I'm specifically well qualified for that job, not just any job. Clearly, I'd be customizing my Profile for each resume I submit.
Areas of Expertise
I had listed my special skills as bullet points at the bottom of my resume. Karen said I should move them up, put them under my profile. She encouraged me to list them in tree columns of equal height to make it easy to review.
Professional Highlights On the draft I sent Karen, I dove right into my chronological work history, emphasizing my greatest accomplishments for each job I've held. Karen told me to insert a Professional Highlights section before my work history. This would allow me strategically order my accomplishments for greatest impact, without regard for where the milestone landed in my professional timeline. Now, based on the parameters of the job I apply for, I coul rearrange my Professional Highlights based on the job requirements. Karen recommended starting off with my most impressive point, and saving my second best for last.Professional Experience
Because I loaded the Professional Highlights with my greatest accomplishments, all I needed to include under my Professional Experience was a line or two about my role and the nature of the business I worked for (and of course my title and employment dates). When it came to the little company I owned, she encouraged me to replace Owner with Director of Operations; employers have ambivalent feelings about people who have owned their own businesses, and it's best to address this during an interview rather than risk being unfairly eliminated during a resume review.
Education, Certifications, Community Involvement
She told me to round-out the resume with simple descriptions of my education, certifications and community involvement. I would be able to expand upon each of these items if and when they came up in an interview.
I went back to work on my resume, and my new draft featured an ultra-specific Profile, a robust Areas of Expertise section, and an impressive list of Professional Highlights. Looking it over, I felt like a force to be reckoned with. Karen agreed, and when she told me she liked my resume, I had a renewed sense of self-confidence. If a career coach like Karen Battoe approved of my resume, I know I could send it to anyone knowing it represented me well.

